WALT plan our recount. We want to focus on a moment in time that will be interesting for our readers
To be successful we will:
- Think of a time in the holidays that was funny, scary, a bit embarrassing, exciting
- Plan the intro, main events, time words and reflection.
I think I am successful because I can see them in my work
Riding The Dirt Bikes
On Thursday sonny and i wanted to ride our dirt bikes at sonny’s house. After that me and sonny got our dirt bikes and helmets out then we put our gum boots on then i kick started my dirt bike and ride over to sonny's house. We rid down the hill and had a couple of races and a wheelie competition.
A few minutes later we swapped dirt bikes and he had a turn on my bike and i had a turn on his bike and as soon a i jumped on his bike i did a big wheelie and almost fell off. Sonny was doing big skids and i did a big skid in his face when he was behind me. Sonny ask me if i wanted a turn on his bike but I didn't want to go on it because i thought i was gonna fall off but i said yup and i jumped on and when i jumped on i did a big big wheelie.
We kept on riding till it got dark…one hour later we ride up the hill when it was time to go i said see you tomorrow sonny and he said yup then i rid back to my house and put my dirt bike away and i had a shower and when i got out of the shower i got change and i was just in time for dinner.
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