Are your clothes made in china?

In class I had to write a recount from the perspective ( view) of a child working in a sweatshop. I close to be a kid working in a Adidas factory. 

I was learning to use descriptive words

I was learning to proof read my writing and fix the mistakes in my work.

Name: Mason                     The day at the adidas factory

On Sunday morning I wearily get out of bed and head to work. I wasn't very excited to go because I will hardly get a  break and not have enough food.
At 5:00 am I walk into the factory. I said to myself I wish I could go to school and make heaps of friends and have fun instead of working 12 hours a day and fainting all the time.  

Hours later the buzzer goes off. It is time for lunch. Man I wish there was weet-bix, noodles, chips and pies instead of dog biscuits, cooked possum and fried pig i’d rather keep working than having a one minute break. This feels like a horror movie I said to my mates chad and apollo. I wish I could disappear. This job is giving me nightmares. my heart dropped.
Finally, it is 8:00 pm. I can finish work and go to sleep. I am too exhausted to work any more. Today was an exhausting day but I got through it and i'm home now. So that's the good thing. I can just go to bed and get ready for work tomorrow.