division D.L.O

A protected beach

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
WALT use language features of persuasive writing

To be successful I will:

Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions)

I learned that emotive language is is sort of like emotioal behaver

                             Lets make a protected beach

I believe we should have more marine reserves in Northland.

Firstly  All sea life will be protected. No one will be allowed to fish commercially or otherwise. It will be illegal to take anything from the sea or beach because it will be protected by the government. People will not be allowed to throw their rubbish around or in the sea because it is protected. This will mean that all sea life will be able to survive. When rubbish is thrown in the sea our fish and  sea life began to get sick and to die and our oceans can easily become polluted. Is this what everyone wants to pollute the sea? I think this is dreadful and disappointing for our country

When our beaches are protected you can easily see that creatures lived and thrive without being disturbed and also with no pollution the water is crystal clear. This is how things have happened in a place called Kapiti Island Marine Reserve. Now because of their marine reserve they now have huge paua, kawari, moana, cushion stars, kuku, kotore and ngahihi. The sea is disgusting it will make swimmers sick. Its yucky and not good for the sea.

Marine reserves

whaea chanella helped me with my first persuasive writing.

I believe we should have more marine reserves in Northland.

Firstly  All sea life will be protected. No one will be allowed to fish commercially or otherwise. It will be illegal to take anything from the sea or beach because it will be protected by the government. People will not be allowed to throw their rubbish around or in the sea because it is protected. This will mean that all sea life will be able to survive. When rubbish is thrown in the sea our fish and  sea life began to get sick and to die and our oceans can easily become polluted. When our beaches are protected you can easily see that creatures lived and thrive without being disturbed and also with no pollution the water is crystal clear. This is how things have happened in a place called Kapiti Island Marine Reserve. Now because of their marine reserve they now have huge paua, kawari, moana, cushion stars, kuku, kotore and ngahihi.