My coordinates graph DLO

How do i sound?

I am learning to read my speech with fluency and expression.

I think I am good at speaking clearly and loudly
I didn't rush my reading
I stop at full stops and commas
I think I need to work on changing my voice and the speed

Here is my book review about a dog finding Kiwi

               Maggie the kiwi dog.

Book review by Mason and Tamaiti-pani.

I read a book called Maggie the kiwi dog with my group. The author is Sue Gibbison. This book is a Article.

This article is about a dog that saves kiwis from getting killed from the logges. This article takes place in Waitangi New Zealand. The dog Maggie has been working to find kiwis for over nine years. Steve and Maggie works for department of conservation.

This is what i learnt about this article this week. This dog is a huntaway dog it has a really strong-eye sight and good, a very good smell so if you have a dog like this dog your dogs very intelligent.

Dirt Bike Ride

WALT plan our recount. We want to focus on a moment in time that will be interesting for our readers

To be successful we will:

• Think of a time in the holidays that was funny, scary, a bit embarrassing, exciting
• Plan the intro, main events, time words and reflection.

I think I am successful because I can see them in my work

                                   Riding The Dirt Bikes

On Thursday sonny and i wanted to ride our dirt bikes at sonny’s house. After that me and sonny got our dirt bikes and helmets out then we put our gum boots on then i kick started my dirt bike and ride over to sonny's house. We rid down the hill and had a couple of races and a wheelie competition.

A few minutes later we swapped dirt bikes and he had a turn on my bike and i had a turn on his bike and as soon a i jumped on his bike i did a big wheelie and almost fell off. Sonny was doing big skids and i did a big skid in his face when he was behind me. Sonny ask me if i wanted a turn on his bike but I didn't want to go on it because i thought i was gonna fall off but i said yup and i jumped on and when i jumped on i did a big big wheelie.

We kept on riding till it got dark…one hour later we ride up the hill when it was time to go i said see you tomorrow sonny and he said yup then i rid back to my house and put my dirt bike away and i had a shower and when i got out of the shower i got change and i was just in time for dinner.

These are the words i wanted to learn