Gengy’s

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Mum, dad, kiana and I were just around the corner from Gengy’s waiting to have dinner. I was so excited I couldn't wait to get inside and smell the greatness. After waiting for a table I rushed like a cheater to the area where the bowls are right next to the meat I just couldn’t wait to get my food cooked.

A few seconds later I got me some vegetables and lots and lots of hot chilli sauce and went inline. A few minutes later I gave my bowl full of goodness to the man who puts the food on the burning stove and he gave me a number to hold so he know the food is mine. A few moments of amazingness later I got me another bowl with the same food in it but this time with more chilli sauce.

I got me my third bowl with marinated pork, marinated chicken, carrots, lettuce, and 12 wole tablespoons of chilli sauce then I went to the line that was so long that I just wanted to hop at the front of the line. A few unbelievable minutes later I said to the man that cooks the food that he doesn't want to wait in that line. I finished my food and said is it time for pancakes and nice melting ice cream.

After my pancake I could barely even walk that was how full I was. I had a incredible dinner and I can't wait to go there again.